Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The New Beggining - 1

Tren Krom was an outcast. Yes he had a new body, but Mata Nui had returned to his rightful place as ruler of this universe. Tren Krom heard Artakha’s voice in his head. “You don’t belong here anymore,” said the voice.
“I know,” said Tren Krom.
“I can send you to a new world where you can rule without disturbance,” said Artakha.
“The Great Beings will find me,” said Tren Krom. “They will either bring me back or make their own ruler for that world.
“I can assure you that they won’t find you,” said Artakha.
“Well,” said Tren Krom, “that world will at least be better than this one.”
His head started to spin and then, he was standing at the edge of a lush, green forest. He stared around and found that there was no life on this planet. He saw a rock sitting on the ground and picked it up. Tren Krom placed both of his hands on the stone. It glowed brightly and in its place stood a small being. Tren Krom had blessed this being with knowledge and speech. The being he would call an Agori after the small beings on his old planet. Tren Krom although he didn’t miss his old home still felt strangely attached to it. The small Agori was brown. Tren Krom set the Agori on the ground. He named the Agori Holnu. “Who are you?” asked Holnu. “Where am I?”
“You are an Agori,” said Tren Krom. “I am the ruler of this planet that you live on. Your name is Holnu. You are a rock Agori.”
“Where am I supposed to live?” asked Holnu.
“I will make you a home,” said Tren Krom. “I will also make you friends to work with you and heroes to protect you.”
“Why can’t you just protect me?” asked Holnu.
“I can,” said Tren Krom, “but where I come from, there are protectors called toa. I cannot always be here to protect you. I may be gone on certain business sometimes.”
Tren Krom brought the Agori to a rocky wasteland. The Agori didn’t know why but he felt very at home here. Tren Krom spent most of that day creating more rock Agori. He had created many when the sun set and Tren Krom saw a moon rise. It was all blue except for a line of green that seemed to run all the way around the moon. It reminded him of Aqua Magna. Tren Krom found a soft place for his immense body to lie down and he closed his eyes.

2 comments:

  1. Hopefully, Ten-Krom won't die in the Official Bionicle storyline. You should continue this.

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  2. i am continuing it. if bionicle ends and Tren Krom doesn't die ill send this to Greg F.

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