Tuesday, November 3, 2009

The New Beggining - 2

Artakha watched the sky over Spherus Magna. It was starting to get dark and Artakha could just barely see the planet that he had sent Tren Krom to. He knew it was for the best. Tren Krom would never challenge Mata Nui now. Suddenly, a dark streak lit the sky and what looked like a comet rapped in a black cloud soared towards Tren Krom’s planet. Artakha was not sure what this was but he decided to contact Tren Krom and tell him that he may be in danger.
Tren Krom heard Artakha’s vice in his head again. “What is it?” he asked.
“You may be in danger,” said Artakha.
“How?” asked Tren Krom.
“I saw something dark headed your way in the sky,” replied Artakha. “It may not be anything but be careful.”
“Ok,” said Tren Krom.
He felt Artakha leave his mind and he went back to work. He had created five villages and was now creating the village of the rock tribe. He set down a small Agori which he had named, Kalro. The village of the rock tribe was set in the mountains that overlooked the jungle. Kalro ran into his shelter and stayed there. Tren Krom had gotten sick of explaining to every Agori he made who they were so he had made them with that knowledge now. When he had created many Agori for each village, he rested.
When Tren Krom opened his eyes, it was dark out. He looked up at the moon. To his surprise, it wasn’t there. He looked around but couldn’t see it anywhere. He looked around once more and then, he saw something. It was a dark mass in the sky. He looked closer and saw that it was the moon but it was now shadowed in darkness. Tren Krom knew that he couldn’t do anything right now. He closed his eyes and decided to worry about it tomorrow.
The next day, Tren Krom looked up into the sky and saw a huge black mass that was once the moon of his planet. He knew he would have to do something. He picked up the branch of a tree and channeled some of his power into it. In a flash of light, the tree branch disappeared and in Tren Krom’s hand stood a toa-sized being. Tren Krom had given this being the power to control plant life. He had the power of the old Element Lord of the Jungle. His name was Varion. Tren Krom set the toa on the ground. The toa had been given the knowledge of what he needed to do. He was to protect the Agori of his village, the village of the jungle tribe. Tren Krom created five more toa their names were, Skala, toa of rock, Celcien, toa of ice, Maliar, toa of fire, Lesoar, toa of water, and Velron, toa of earth. He set each of the toa in their villages. He then contacted Artakha. “Artakha,” said Tren Krom, “I need your help.”“What do you need?” asked Artakha.
“Something has happened and I need you to transport me to the moon of this planet,” said Tren Krom.
“Got it,” said Artakha.
The world started to spin around Tren Krom and then he was on the moon of his planet. He was on the stretch of land that went all the way around the moon. The island was not green anymore. The grass and trees were blackened and dead. The sea that made up most of the planet was dried up. It seemed like the whole moon had died. Tren Krom heard movement behind him and turned around.

3 comments:

  1. Great story, the only thing is that Ten Krom is not this "noble' as he is in the Official story.

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  2. this story though is exceptionally good.

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